I am improving, the writing obviously.
I can feel it. As if the connections in my brain were getting the hang of it, as if my brain was finally assimilating what was expected of it. And it makes me feel really good about it.
The rhythm especially is getting better. The dialogues are going to the point, the descriptive parts are getting shorter, the structure better.
It is coming together. I see the mistakes. I see where it is going wrong. More and more. It jumps to my face and I like that it finally comes more naturally to me.
Sure I have re-written this stuff again. Sure it is very slow.
But it is the getting there that I am enjoying today.